Wednesday, 25 May 2016

Mid Year Exam


The topic I chose was Identity. All of this inspired by my country: Vietnam. 













Final artwork.








10 comments:

  1. Good points

    Areas for improvement

    How you feel about her artwork

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  4. Your drawings and paintings are really good and realistic. You are really good in watercolour.

    What you can improve on is your time management to complete all your boards. An example is the incomplete artist reference drawing and the uncoloured layouts and the messy writing on your colour scheme page.

    I feel that you are very talented and I can see it in your works. Keep it up!

    `Naomi :D

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  6. Your drawing and paintings are very well.The colours you use very nice.It really very interesting.
    i think the pencil printing is very weak.You can improve in may use 3B pencil and one work is uncompleted.
    I feel the work is very nice and you really put affect in your work

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  7. nice varieties of medium. very outstanding images being drawn . very realistic and good combination based on juxtaposition and manipulation in the artist reference drawing.




    incomplete boards. need more time to focus on different drawings such as the layouts. and need to use different visible colours to make your drawing outstanding






    you and abby are very talented #foreigntalent. can be an art teacher in future. overtake ms liyana in future.







    nifael.

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  8. I love your shading techniques, it makes your drawings seem much more realistic and I like it! There are various tones in the shadings and they look so beautiful. Also, the choices of colours that you pick out are subtle and soft, and they are pleasing to my eyes as well. :)

    However, your final artwork is a little dissappointing. The colours use in your artpiece is pale and very light, and I think there are much more colours you could add in to make it more vibrant and colourful.

    Overall, I think that you are capable of doing much better for your final artwork, looking at your preparation boards! You are very talented, keep up the good work! :)

    -Shaqilla.



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  9. You have a great shading technique. You have used a variety of colours and tones to make your artwork be more realistic. Very talented in water colors! Keep it up!

    You should have coloured and painted your layouts. It would have been better as it would better in your artwork presentations. You can score a distinction!! Keep it up!

    Hairi Syafiee

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    1. Overrall, you are a talented person in art. Your art works looks realistic and better than expected. Keep it up!

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